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(y/n) panted as he ran through the house. For once he was scared of the one he loved. He ran into a closet hoping America wouldn't find him. It seemed God wasn't on his side. America pulled him out of the closet and grinned at him. "Hello babe."

America's vision went red as he began to hit (y/n) with his bat. When the red left his vision America realized what he had done. (y/n)'s (h/c) was matted with blood. The blood was still coming from a crack in his skull. "What have I done?"

*Time Skip*

America stood in front of (y/n)'s grave. It had been five years since America had killed him. Although some of the other 2ps tried to make him feel better it didn't help. (y/n) was gone and no one could change that fact.

"Excuse me sir are you alright?" America looked to his right and saw a young boy with (h/c) and (e/c) eyes. He couldn't have been older than five. "I'm fine," Alfred said. "Then why are you crying?" the boy asked. America blinked and for the first time noticed the tears going down his face. "My name is (y/n). What's your's?" America smiled. "Al." "Well it was nice to meet you Mr. Al!" (y/n) exclaimed happily before running off.

"Good-bye, (y/n)," America whispered with a smile on his face.
Had this idea for awhile. I was crying while writing this... T^T

Hetalia doesn't belong to me.
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:iconkspowell2002:
Kspowell2002 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Student Filmographer
Dat profile pic doh
back to the story
sadness
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soulsociety96 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that profile picture?
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:icondogshampoo24:
Dogshampoo24 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
Was he drunk when he killed me?
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:icongurlllllllllllll:
Gurlllllllllllll Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
W-why did you kill me Alfred?! :scared: 
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:iconlebroken:
LeBroken Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Artist
:iconscaredplz: Why w-would he t-try and k-kill me!?!? .... .. .... I will never..ever.. look at Alfred F. Jones the same..agaon.. There was only one question in my head? ;_; Why did he beat me to death!!?
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is the mystery~
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:iconlebroken:
LeBroken Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Artist
;_; You cliffhanging authors.. You're going to be the death of me..
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Part two is up
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:iconlebroken:
LeBroken Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Artist
OhmygodIloveyou.
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Everyone does~
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:iconlebroken:
LeBroken Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Artist
Lol~
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey I only speak the truth~
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:iconwolf-chibichan:
wolf-chibichan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
If it wasn't because I'm eating an apple I would cry... (I tend to get distracted when I'm eating so the feelings doesn't touch as deep)
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft I block the world out when I'm eating XD
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:iconwolf-chibichan:
wolf-chibichan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
XD Yeah. I was reading something I was supposed to cry to when I was eating strawberries and I was like; Aaaw that's sad. *grins and munches on strawberries*
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warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft I laugh at gore when I'm eating......... Then again I always laugh at gore XD *is a sick twisted person*
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:iconwolf-chibichan:
wolf-chibichan Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
xD I guess that's one way of handling gore... I just read gore and wrinkle my nose at the worse parts.
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:iconcannibalrabbit:
CannibalRabbit Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Student Filmographer
Oh wow.. This... This was quite touching.
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If you liked this one you should read the second one
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:iconcannibalrabbit:
CannibalRabbit Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks, maybe I will!
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:iconsuikaisonfire:
suikaisonfire Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconsoemotionalplz: I don't really like short story's but..
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:icondearbealovedquietcan:
So beautiful~ my 2p! nyotalia Inner Mongolia: Baatar thanks you~
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:iconkasukabe12:
kasukabe12 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Alice/Shirley-AMERICA KILLED BROTHER
Allen-but wait what im not dead.
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:iconbloodlineparadise:
Bloodlineparadise Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Writer
I love this. Even if i died.

am i really the only commenter who managed to keep a straight face through this? ;A;
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HetaOniFTW2 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
nope~! your not alone in that.
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:iconbloodlineparadise:
Bloodlineparadise Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
YOSH!! Thank you.
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
You REALLY need to make a part 2
:worship:
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
NO NO MAYBE YES YOU WILL MAKE A PART 2
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU CAN'T MAKE ME!
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Oh you really want to go there
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Bitch let's go
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Fine but after break ok
SEE YOU AT SCHOOL ^^
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NO!
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:iconjessierose101:
JessieRose101 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D:> *sniff*
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*holds out tissue box* Tissue?
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:iconjessierose101:
JessieRose101 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes please Thank you....*goes to sit in a corner*
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:iconsamikira:
samikira Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist
TT^TT so sad but as awesome as prussia
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. Collin helped me write it
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:iconsamikira:
samikira Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist
of course collin did
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha
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:iconsamikira:
samikira Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist
XDDDD lol
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Pffft... He's complaining that you aren't very nice
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:iconsamikira:
samikira Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist
how am i not nice he's the one blurting out my business
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*shrugs* No idea
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Ah I love it
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Danke
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
what...???
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:iconwarrior-shampoo72:
warrior-shampoo72 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nevermind you're an idiot •^•
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:iconemolove590:
emolove590 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
You and I both know that
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